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Jan 18Liked by Sarah G. Young

Great story! Thanks for writing it!

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Thank you! ☺️

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It makes me winder where you’d go if you had ideas? I like what you’ve done here writing from a sci-fi perspective and playing around with names. Your story bursts with plot and subplots waiting to happen.

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Thank you very much! I have too many ideas, which is why one of the things I'm working on as a writer is knowing what to leave out. :) I'm glad you enjoyed the music too - I get so much inspiration from music, and electronic music fuels a lot of sci-fi ideas for me.

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Swanksy made me think if Banksy! I sometimes listen to music when I write but other times I find it distracting. Knowing what to leave out is something we all need to work on.

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Haha you caught me! For some unknown reason, I thought of Banksy while I was brainstorming, so I wanted to rhyme the dog's name with it ;)

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Don’t blame you. Both are good names.

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Oh my! I loved the music. Did you listen to this while writing? I now am going back to read yours minus the music. I love how we all created a different world and characters from quite a complex prompt.

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