8 Comments
User's avatar
William Cory's avatar

Great story! Thanks for writing it!

Expand full comment
Sarah G. Young's avatar

Thank you! ☺️

Expand full comment
Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

It makes me winder where you’d go if you had ideas? I like what you’ve done here writing from a sci-fi perspective and playing around with names. Your story bursts with plot and subplots waiting to happen.

Expand full comment
Sarah G. Young's avatar

Thank you very much! I have too many ideas, which is why one of the things I'm working on as a writer is knowing what to leave out. :) I'm glad you enjoyed the music too - I get so much inspiration from music, and electronic music fuels a lot of sci-fi ideas for me.

Expand full comment
Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Swanksy made me think if Banksy! I sometimes listen to music when I write but other times I find it distracting. Knowing what to leave out is something we all need to work on.

Expand full comment
Sarah G. Young's avatar

Haha you caught me! For some unknown reason, I thought of Banksy while I was brainstorming, so I wanted to rhyme the dog's name with it ;)

Expand full comment
Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Don’t blame you. Both are good names.

Expand full comment
Writer Pilgrim by So Elite's avatar

Oh my! I loved the music. Did you listen to this while writing? I now am going back to read yours minus the music. I love how we all created a different world and characters from quite a complex prompt.

Expand full comment